Awaking to a pure white covered hill,
I'm out of bed cause there's time to kill.
I layer lots of clothing to stay warm
out in the wonderful December storm.
Once dressed nice and cozy, I rush upstairs
to mention sledding and see if mom cares.
She says yes and reminds me to be safe,
I jump for joy, and I'm off with a wave.
My first step in the snow is a great one,
and the purest white snow reflects the sun.
My layers make it difficult to move
I rush as if there's something to prove.
I place my sled upon the soft, white ground
Quiet and clean, there is no one around.
With a quick leap, I am onto my sled.
"It's time for breakfast come inside," Mom said.
No! I could not, I was just getting good!
For sure, a couple more quick rounds I could.
I would glide fast down those snow covered hills,
And avoid bushes with my newfound skills.
I will hurry so breakfast is still warm.
Maybe I will beat the oven alarm.
This is it, my final, downhill slope ride,
I love sledding! There's no rules to abide!
I'm out of bed cause there's time to kill.
I layer lots of clothing to stay warm
out in the wonderful December storm.
Once dressed nice and cozy, I rush upstairs
to mention sledding and see if mom cares.
She says yes and reminds me to be safe,
I jump for joy, and I'm off with a wave.
My first step in the snow is a great one,
and the purest white snow reflects the sun.
My layers make it difficult to move
I rush as if there's something to prove.
I place my sled upon the soft, white ground
Quiet and clean, there is no one around.
With a quick leap, I am onto my sled.
"It's time for breakfast come inside," Mom said.
No! I could not, I was just getting good!
For sure, a couple more quick rounds I could.
I would glide fast down those snow covered hills,
And avoid bushes with my newfound skills.
I will hurry so breakfast is still warm.
Maybe I will beat the oven alarm.
This is it, my final, downhill slope ride,
I love sledding! There's no rules to abide!
I think this was pretty good because it rhymed and had iambic pentameter. I don't know if we are supposed to say something negative this time, but I can't think of anything because it met all the stipulations.
ReplyDeleteI like how you start the poem off with you waking up and seeing that there is snow! And then you continue to tell about your day sledding and I like how its play by play. I enjoy the way you write.
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